The first 50 pages of your manuscript are integral to your novel’s success. They have a very specific job to do, providing an accurate snapshot of your pace, your worldbuilding, your characters and your plot. It is therefore important to get it right before sending it off to agents!
A ‘First 50 Pages’ critique takes a look at all the essential elements of a killer opening, ensuring you hit all the right story beats before you send your manuscript off to query.
Submission / Query Checklist
Have you got everything you need? Before sending your manuscript to agents, check their website to make sure you’ve followed their specific submission requirements.
First 50 Pages
(Some agents may ask for your first 3 chapters instead.)
This is a 1-page overview of your novel.
Agents might ask for a chapter breakdown as well as a synopsis.
This covering letter will likely include the dreaded 1-line ‘Pitch’.
What’s included with a ‘First 50 Pages’ critique?
A close, honest read of your first 50 pages (or your first 3 chapters)
Constructive comments on characterisation and consistency, including character arcs
Feedback on theme effectiveness and narrative choices (including POVs)
Suggestions for world-building opportunities
Detailed feedback on novel pace and structure, including story beats
Friendly critique of plot arcs and opportunities for development, including any potential plot holes
Basic proofreading, including typos, grammatical errors and clarity of prose
A revised copy of your document with changes made via MS Word Track Changes
How much does it cost?
The first 50 pages (or first 3 chapters) of a novel typically have a combined word count of around 12,500 words.
Based on that amount, a critique costs a flat fee of £50.00.
However, novels are tricky beasts and there are many reasons why a chapter word count may differ from that number. If you’ve written a children’s novel, the first 3 chapters may fall dramatically short of 12,500 words. The first 3 chapters of an adult fantasy novel may greatly exceed it.
If you have any questions about the pricing of your project, please contact me via the form below and I will be happy to provide you with an accurate quote.
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Not sure a Critique is for you?
I offer a sample edit of up to 5,000 words. It’s a great opportunity to see how we might work together and there is no obligation to purchase full services. Why not give it a try?